11th May
Saw this work two weeks ago. There should be at least two new sets of obs, selects and edits by now. We talked about peeling the layer away and revealing something else. As we said, if the face beneath whatever is being peeled back is the same as the face with the layer of facemask on it, what is the point? Look at the work of Manny Robertson. You could combine two people or different 'versions' of the same person. You don't have to use the stitching! |
25/04/2014
OH my....where is the work.
Make sure the tasks early on in your project make links to photographers and wider themes. You have a tendency to merely des cribe what you did.
At this late stage in the project I suggest that you move the compilations of images about one person to the bottom of the work you have produced so far and continue with this as the main idea for your project. Anything beyond this seems to require too much effort on your part.
Please, please, annotate your work: what are your intentions, what went well, even better if, what's next. What is the relevance of your holiday pics- to the theme and your project's development?
OH my....where is the work.
Make sure the tasks early on in your project make links to photographers and wider themes. You have a tendency to merely des cribe what you did.
At this late stage in the project I suggest that you move the compilations of images about one person to the bottom of the work you have produced so far and continue with this as the main idea for your project. Anything beyond this seems to require too much effort on your part.
Please, please, annotate your work: what are your intentions, what went well, even better if, what's next. What is the relevance of your holiday pics- to the theme and your project's development?
peter beard
dan eldon
paolo pellegrin
stuart franklin
jim goldberg KayLynn Deveney
Julian Germain
1. Grandma- house, Jim Goldberg, Dan Eldon- could develop into a stop frame animation.
2. Psycholgy link- gender role. What makes me and women. Media and social pressures. Composite image of a space including the same person as different ages. Rankin Dolls. Highly stylised. Mannequins.
3. UV paint on plants. Use the UV light in Drama to illuminate and photograph.
dan eldon
paolo pellegrin
stuart franklin
jim goldberg KayLynn Deveney
Julian Germain
1. Grandma- house, Jim Goldberg, Dan Eldon- could develop into a stop frame animation.
2. Psycholgy link- gender role. What makes me and women. Media and social pressures. Composite image of a space including the same person as different ages. Rankin Dolls. Highly stylised. Mannequins.
3. UV paint on plants. Use the UV light in Drama to illuminate and photograph.
26th JanuaryOn location photograph 2020 / 2050 woman.
Practical- Really like your new set. The styling etc is superb. It's just annoying that you do not always frame your subject well. You frequently chop your models feet off or something else is left out of the image. I particularly like the image where the girl is in the pink top leaning over you. I like how the colours are distorted.
Next steps. Could you use headlights to create other scenarios in not so pleasant areas?
Next steps. Could you use headlights to create other scenarios in not so pleasant areas?
Barcelona:
I like how you have themed the images however please include some abbreviated contact sheets. Not now though- you need to prioritise work that is still outstanding.
I like how you have themed the images however please include some abbreviated contact sheets. Not now though- you need to prioritise work that is still outstanding.